Copyediting blog Scriptae Viri Commenticii takes apart the lede to CNN's Michael Jackson story:

"Michael Jackson's teenage accuser said Thursday that the pop star manually stimulated him on two separate occasions-and tried to get the then-13 year old to do the same to him during overnight sleepovers at Jackson's Neverland Ranch two years ago."

Can you find out how to clean that up? Take a stab and then see the correct answer.